Question: Who are the two main characters?
Thesis: I think the main characters are best friends and they are on a journey together to fight evil werewolves.
Reason One: The main characters are best friends, because the first main character told the second main character that he can take on the werewolves himself and the first main character asks the other guy to go upstairs so he doesn't get hurt. (Expand)
Reason Two: They are on a journey together, because they are both wearing knight uniforms, as if they knew they were about to fight evil werewolves. (Expand)
Reason Three: The two main characters are fighting evil werewolves because the beasts look exactly like evil werewolves. (Expand)
Conclusion: Thesis and add something (thought?)
with more detail behind your reasons you will have a great final analysis. a thought on your conclusion: talk about the images that show they are together. for your thesis, don't say "i think", just start with "the main characters". great reasons, good thesis. should make a good analysis!
ReplyDeleteSuper, especial since i saw the frames you chose. I can see where you got your details and from them your reasons. Nice start with your analysis.
ReplyDeleteYour thesis seems really general; try to make it more specific (use the supporting elements you have chosen to do this). I agree with you that your supporting elements should be expanded.
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