Chalk Up That Memoir

Today was a sort of work day in class. I worked on my memoir, which is chalking up pretty well in my opinion. I'm having a really difficult time giving my main characters good descriptions. I have a couple of them down, but one of them is completely bombed. I also want to change my opening and closing paragraphs, but I don't know if I will. I like them and I don't know if they should be changed, but they sound pretty cliche to me. I also want to add to the second to last paragraph, as I leave Vince's houses. I feel as though it should be more intense. So, I also have genre transformations to do. I'm going to go get on that now.